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제 목 Would you like to read the notes, drafts or manuscripts written by famous authors?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2021-06-26
작성글 A.) Would you like to read the notes, drafts or manuscripts written by famous authors?

I have curiosity for famous authors' papers.
But I am not passionate enough to read them.


B.) Make these sentences into English.

(06/23/21)

-신용장은 저희 거래를 용이하게 만들 것입니다.
The letter of credit will make our business easy.

-신용장을 개설하는 절차가 생각보다 길어질 수도 있습니다.
The procedure of opening the letter of credit could be longer than you thought.

-전체 대금의 70퍼센트에 해당하는 금액으로 신용장을 열겠습니다.
We will open the letter of credit for 70% of the total amount.


교정내용

A.) Would you like to read the notes, drafts or manuscripts written by famous authors?

 

I have curiosity for famous authors' papers. 

But I am not passionate enough to read them. 

 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(06/23/21)

 

-신용장은 저희 거래를 용이하게 만들 것입니다.

The letter of credit  will make our business easy. 

 

-신용장을 개설하는 절차가 생각보다 길어질 수도 있습니다.

The procedure of opening the letter of credit could be longer than you thought. 

​ OR 

=>The letter of credit might take longer than we thought to actually process.

 

-전체 대금의 70퍼센트에 해당하는 금액으로 신용장을 열겠습니다.

We will open the letter of credit for 70% of the total amount. ​​

 

 

 

• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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