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교정강사 Erica(C)
등록일 2021-04-10
작성글 It is Saturday and sunny day. I had a cup of coffee in the verander getting sunlight as usual.
My husband is busy translating for his job now and my daughter is sleeping.
I am sitting on the chair in the sunlight and I stay calm and relax.
It's spring season so trees are coming out their fresh green leaves. Green leaves are like baby skin. They are tiny, soft and pretty.
I am happy that our apartment can get sunlight all day long. We paid a lot of money for this but I am satisfied.
Before we moved in, I was so jealous of full sunlight verander. We felt cold during winter season then.
Well, have a good weekend. Bye
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It is Saturday and sunny day. I am having a cup of coffee in the veranda getting sunlight as usual. My husband is busy with his job now and my daughter is sleeping. I am sitting on the chair that reaches the sunlight and I stay calm and relax. It's spring season so leaves coming out from the trees. Green leaves are like baby’s skin. They are tiny, soft and pretty.

I am happy that our apartment can get sunlight all day long. We paid a lot of money for this but I am satisfied. Before we moved in, I was so jealous of full sunlight veranda. We felt cold during winter season then.

Well, have a good weekend. Bye​ 

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