본 화상영어는은 업계 최고의 노하우만을 연구하고
개발한, 가장 진보되고, 창의적인 교육 시스템 연구기관 입니다.
제 목 | Give me corrections |
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교정강사 | Erica(C) |
등록일 | 2021-04-10 |
작성글 |
It is Saturday and sunny day. I had a cup of coffee in the verander getting sunlight as usual. My husband is busy translating for his job now and my daughter is sleeping. I am sitting on the chair in the sunlight and I stay calm and relax. It's spring season so trees are coming out their fresh green leaves. Green leaves are like baby skin. They are tiny, soft and pretty. I am happy that our apartment can get sunlight all day long. We paid a lot of money for this but I am satisfied. Before we moved in, I was so jealous of full sunlight verander. We felt cold during winter season then. Well, have a good weekend. Bye |
교정내용 |
It is Saturday and sunny day. I am having a cup of coffee in the veranda getting sunlight as usual. My husband is busy with his job now and my daughter is sleeping. I am sitting on the chair that reaches the sunlight and I stay calm and relax. It's spring season so leaves coming out from the trees. Green leaves are like baby’s skin. They are tiny, soft and pretty. I am happy that
our apartment can get sunlight all day long. We paid a lot of money for this
but I am satisfied. Before we moved in, I was so jealous of full sunlight
veranda. We felt cold during winter season then. Well, have a good weekend. Bye |
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