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교정강사 Erica(C)
등록일 2021-04-12
작성글 It is raining now. I am totally free today and I am here in this board now.
My friend and I went to the lake far from my apartment. She drove a car. There was traffic jam because it was Sunday.
We talked a lot walking around the lake. There were many duck boats on the lake. They were beautiful and looked peaceful.
It's a sunny day and people enjoyed a good scenery. Spring flowers like cherry blossoms were already withering.
I like Spring. The first reason I like spring is the weather. It's no longer cold. I hate winter coldness.
Because of traffic jam, it took so long there. But she didn't piss me off like my husband.
Sometimes I prefer my friend to my husband. Anyway we made a good memory yesterday. Bye
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It is raining now. I am totally free today and I am here in being bored now.

My friend and I went to the lake far from my apartment. She drove a car. There was a traffic jam because it was Sunday. We talked a lot while walking around the lake. There were many duck boats on the lake. They were beautiful and looked peaceful.

It's a sunny day and people enjoyed a good scenery. Spring flowers like cherry blossoms were already withering. I like Spring. The first reason I like spring is the weather. It's no longer cold. I hate the coldness of winter

Because of traffic jam, it took us so long to get there. But she didn't piss me off like my husband.

Sometimes I prefer being with my friend than my   husband. Anyway, we made a good memory yesterday. Bye  

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