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제 목 | Hi |
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교정강사 | Erica(C) |
등록일 | 2021-04-12 |
작성글 |
It is raining now. I am totally free today and I am here in this board now. My friend and I went to the lake far from my apartment. She drove a car. There was traffic jam because it was Sunday. We talked a lot walking around the lake. There were many duck boats on the lake. They were beautiful and looked peaceful. It's a sunny day and people enjoyed a good scenery. Spring flowers like cherry blossoms were already withering. I like Spring. The first reason I like spring is the weather. It's no longer cold. I hate winter coldness. Because of traffic jam, it took so long there. But she didn't piss me off like my husband. Sometimes I prefer my friend to my husband. Anyway we made a good memory yesterday. Bye |
교정내용 |
It is raining now. I am totally free today and I am here in being bored now. My friend and I went to the lake far from my apartment. She
drove a car. There was a traffic jam because it was Sunday. We talked a lot while
walking around the lake. There were many duck boats on the lake. They were
beautiful and looked peaceful. It's a sunny day and people enjoyed a good scenery. Spring
flowers like cherry blossoms were already withering. I like Spring. The first
reason I like spring is the weather. It's no longer cold. I hate the coldness
of winter Because of traffic jam, it took us so long to get there. But
she didn't piss me off like my husband. Sometimes I prefer being with my friend than my husband. Anyway, we made a good memory yesterday. Bye |
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