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교정강사 Sarah(C)
등록일 2021-07-15
작성글 A.Do you think it is more important for you to eat healthy or tasty food?
->I think tasty food is more important. because eating tasty food makes me happy.

-안녕, 돌돌아.
->Hello, Doldol.

-누구야?
->Who is she?

-그녀는 내 친구 심순이야.
-> She is my friend, Simsoon
교정내용

A.Do you think it is more important for you to eat healthy or tasty food?

->I think tasty food is more important. because  eating tasty food makes me happy.

=> Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically. 

=> I think it's more important to eat tasty food, because eating tasty food makes me happy.

 

-안녕, 돌돌아.

->Hello, Doldol. (Correct)

 

-누구야?

->Who is she?  (Correct)

 

 

-그녀는 내 친구 심순이야.

-> She is my friend, Simsoon  (Correct)

 

 

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