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교정강사 Ernest(C)
등록일 2021-07-16
작성글 [HOMEWORK]
A. Write a sentence using the word "discover".
Discover means find or experience new thing. But, it is dangerous.
B. Make these sentences into English.
-안녕, 돌돌아.
Hi Doldol.
-누구야?
Who is it?
-그녀는 내 친구 심순이야.
She is my friend Simsoon.
교정내용

[HOMEWORK]

A. Write a sentence using the word "discover".

 Discover means find or experience new thing. But, it is dangerous. => Another way: Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

Discover means find or experience new thing but sometimes it is dangerous.

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

-안녕, 돌돌아.

 Hi Doldol.  

 

-누구야?

 Who is it? => Corrected vocabulary.

​Who's she?

 

-그녀는 내 친구 심순이야.

 She is my friend, Simsoon. 


Wow! Good work, Ryan! See you in class ^^​

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