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교정강사 Mariel(C)
등록일 2021-07-16
작성글 A. How do you feel when there is a power outage at your house?
(to be scary)
B. Make these sentences into English.

-나는 컴퓨터가 필요해.(I need a computer)
-나는 컴퓨터 새로 샀어.(I bought a new computer)
-웬일이니, 돌돌아?게임 같이 할래?(What,Doldol.Why don't we play games together)
교정내용

How do you feel when there is a power outage at your house? 

(to be scary)​ -- I feel scared.  => Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.

 

I need a computer. 

I bought a new computer. 

What,Doldol.Why don't we play games together -->What's going on Doldol? Shall we play the computer game? => Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.

 

 

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