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교정강사 Mariel(C)
등록일 2021-07-16
작성글 A. What do you usually play using your smart phone?
(I usually watch youtube)
B. Make these sentences into English.

-오, 그래?(Oh,really?)
-엄청 많은 가전 제품들이 있더라.나 컴퓨터 새로 샀어.
(There are many home appliances.I bought a new computer)
-축하해!(Congratulations)
교정내용

What do you usually play using your smart phone? 

I usually watch youtube. -- I usually watch YouTube videos. => Another way: Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

 

​Oh,really?  

There are many home appliances.I bought a new computer. -->There were a lot of electronics. I bought a new computer.  => Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.

Congratulations  --> Congratulations! (Punctuation)

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