o you like to eat some desserts after dinner? Why? or Why not? 

Yes,I like it.Because the desserts is so delicious). --> Yes, I like it. Because desserts are so delicious.  

와! 넌 로봇을 가지고 있네.어디서 났니? -->  Wow! You got a robot. How did you get it? 

아빠가 상품으로 받은 거야.나는 아빠가 자랑스러웠어. --> My father won a prize. I was proud of him. 

Did you watch Parade? --> Did you see the parade? 

=> Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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