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제 목 Would you like to be a member of the Templeton Prize panel?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2021-07-17
작성글 A.) Would you like to be a member of the Templeton Prize panel?

It would be my honor to be a member of the Templeton Prize panel.
I have no reason to reject the proposal.


B.) Make these sentences into English.

(07/02/21)

-저희 가게는 리베이트 자격요건을 넘어 섰습니다.
Our store is over the qualification for rebate.

-당신의 성취를 축하 드립니다.
I would like to applaud your achievement.

-현재 환급률이 얼마인가요?
What is the current refund rate?
교정내용

A.) Would you like to be a member of the Templeton Prize panel?

 

 It would be my honor to be a member of the Templeton Prize panel.

I have no reason to reject  the proposal. 

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B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(07/02/21)

 

-저희 가게는 리베이트 자격요건을 넘어 섰습니다.

Our store is over the qualification for  rebate.

 

OR 

=> Our store has surpassed the requirement for rebate.

 

-당신의 성취를 축하 드립니다.

I  would like to applaud your achievement.

 

=> We congratulate you of your achievement.

 

-현재 환급률이 얼마인가요?

What is the current refund rate? 

OR 

=> What is the current rebate rate? 


• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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