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제 목 What was used to make the cast for the little sister?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2021-07-17
작성글 A.) What was used to make the cast for the little sister?

Sculptors normally make a scaled-down model before creating a large sculpture.
It is usually made of plaster.
The Statue of Liberty standing on the harbor of New York was not the exception.
Its scaled-down model was used to make the cast for the little sister.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(07/07/21)

-리드 타임 하나도 3주가 걸린다는 것을 감안하면 실현 가능성이 낮습니다.
Considering the lead time of 3 weeks, it has little feasibility.

-리드 타임을 줄일 수 있는 방법은 없나요?
Don't you know how to reduce the lead time?

-조립생산은 1주일 걸리지만 부품이 도착하려면 2주가 걸립니다.
Although it takes a week to assemble, compartments arrive two weeks later.
교정내용

A.) What was used to make the cast for the little sister?

 

Sculptors normally make a scaled-down model before creating a large sculpture.

It is usually made of  plaster.

The Statue of Liberty standing on  the harbor of New York  was not  the exception.

Its scaled-down model was used to make the cast for the little sister. 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(07/07/21)

 

-리드 타임 하나도 3주가 걸린다는 것을 감안하면 실현 가능성이 낮습니다.

Considering  the lead time of 3 weeks, it has little feasibility.

 

OR 

=> That's not very feasible given that lead time alone takes 3 weeks.

 

-리드 타임을 줄일 수 있는 방법은 없나요?

Don't you know how to reduce the lead time?

 

=>Is it possible to cut the lead time?


-조립생산은 1주일 걸리지만 부품이 도착하려면 2주가 걸립니다.

Although  it  takes  a week to assemble, compartments arrive two weeks later. 

 

=> The assembly happens in a week, but it takes two for the parts to arrive.


• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.

 

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