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제 목 When is or was the happiest time of your life? Why?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2021-07-17
작성글 A.) If When is or was the happiest time of your life? Why?

I would be the happiest when my elder daughter was burn.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(07/09/21)

-추가 요금을 내는 대신 우선권을 받을 수 있을까요?
Does additional fee enable me to get priority?

-적절한 보험회사를 찾도록 합시다.
Let's look for an appropriate insurer.

-우리 제품이 보험에 가입되어 있었으면 합니다
I would like our products to be insured.
교정내용

A.) If When is or was the happiest time of your life? Why?

 

I  would  be the happiest when my elder daughter was burn.

 

=> I would be the happiest when my elder daughter was born.​

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(07/09/21)

 

-추가 요금을 내는 대신 우선권을 받을 수 있을까요?

Does additional fee  enable me to get priority?

 

OR 

=> Could we ask for preferential treatment in return for extra payment?

-적절한 보험회사를 찾도록 합시다.

Let's look for an appropriate insurer.

 

OR 

=> Let's find an appropriate insurance company.

 

-우리 제품이 보험에 가입되어 있었으면 합니다

I would like our products to be insured.

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• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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