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제 목 Should all countries organize annual tree-planting days?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2021-07-18
작성글 Should all countries organize annual tree-planting days?

Trees are essential to keep our environment stable or balanced.
Their importance must not be forgotten.
So a certain event is needed for people to recognize it.
Organizing annual tree-planting days could be one of the way.
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Should all countries organize annual tree-planting days?

 

Trees are essential to keep our environment  stable or balanced.

Their importance must not be forgotten.

So a certain event is needed  for people to recognize it.

Organizing annual tree-planting days could be one of the ways 

 

• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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