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제 목 | Should all countries organize annual tree-planting days? |
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교정강사 | Colleen(C) |
등록일 | 2021-07-18 |
작성글 |
Should all countries organize annual tree-planting days? Trees are essential to keep our environment stable or balanced. Their importance must not be forgotten. So a certain event is needed for people to recognize it. Organizing annual tree-planting days could be one of the way. |
교정내용 |
Should all countries organize annual tree-planting days?
Trees are essential to keep our environment stable or balanced. Their importance must not be forgotten. So a certain event is needed for people to recognize it. Organizing annual tree-planting days could be one of the ways.
• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically. |
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