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제 목 7/19(월)jack
교정강사 Erica(C)
등록일 2021-07-19
작성글 HOMEWORK:
A. Describe your bedroom. What do you have in your bedroom?
My bedroom has bunk and a closet.
B. Make these sentences into English.
(07/19/21)
-어떻게 만들었니? = How did you make it?
-간단하지만 저만의 비밀 이예요. = It`s easy but it`s my secret.
-배부르다.너는 뭐 하고싶니? = I`m full.What do you want to do?
교정내용

My bedroom has bunk a bunk bed and a closet.

=> Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/ expression.

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(07/19/21)

-어떻게 만들었니? = How did you make it?   => Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically.

-간단하지만 저만의 비밀 이예요. = It`s easy but it`s my secret. -> It's simple,but it's secret.

-배부르다.너는 하고싶니? = I`m full. What do you want to do? -> I'm full. What do you like to do?

=> Another way: Your sentences are okay and these are other ways of saying them. 

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