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제 목 Which city do you think is the “most livable” in your country?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2021-07-25
작성글 A.) Which city do you think is the “most livable” in your country?

Among many cities I have ever visited, Busan would be the most livable in Korea.
It has good environment and climate.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(07/16/21)

-교체하는데 드는 비용은 저희가
부담합니다.
We will pay for the replacement cost.

-하자가 계속해서 발견되면
협력업체를 바꿔야 핛지도
모르겠네요.
If faults are found continuously, we might have to change the partner.

-젗품을 시험해보기 위해 리드 타임이
더 필요합니다
we need more lead-time to test products.
교정내용

A.) Which city do you think is the “most livable” in your country?

 

Among many cities I have ever visited, Busan would be the most livable in Korea. 

It has good environment and climate. 

=> It has a good environment and climate. 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(07/16/21)

 

-교체하는데 드는 비용은 저희가

부담합니다.

We will pay for the replacement cost.

OR 

=> Replacements are made at our expense.

-하자가 계속해서 발견되면

협력업체를 바꿔야 핛지도

모르겠네요.

If faults are found continuously, we might have to change the partner.

OR 

=> We might have to change business partners if defective products keep appearing.

-젗품을 시험해보기 위해 리드 타임이

더 필요합니다

we need more lead-time to test products.

=> We need more lead time to test our products.

 

 

• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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