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제 목 Will the Chinese Communist Party remain powerful?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2021-07-25
작성글 A.) Will the Chinese Communist Party remain powerful?

No power must be eternal.
Some time in the future, a change will be sure to happen in the Chinese Communist Party.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(07/19/21)

-엄격핚 품질관리를 유지하는 겂이
중요합니다.
Maintaining strict control of quality is important.

-문제가 계속해서 발생하면 재주문이
끊길 수도 있습니다.
If problems happen continuously, reorder could cease.

-검사기죾을 강화하고 리드 타임을
늘리세요.
You need to make the inspection criteria strict and lengthen the lead-time.
교정내용

A.) Will the Chinese Communist Party remain powerful?

 

No power must be eternal. 

​Some time in the future, a change will be sure to happen in the Chinese Communist Party. 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(07/19/21)

 

-엄격핚 품질관리를 유지하는 겂이

중요합니다.

Maintaining strict control of quality is important.

OR 

=> It's important that quality control remains strict.


-문제가 계속해서 발생하면 재주문이

끊길 수도 있습니다.

If problems happen continuously, reorder could cease.

OR 

=> We might lose repeat orders if defects keep occurring.

 

-검사기죾을 강화하고 리드 타임을

늘리세요.

You need to make the inspection criteria  strict  and lengthen the lead-time.

OR 

=> Strengthen the inspection criteria and increase lead time.

​ 

• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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