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교정강사 Catherine(C)
등록일 2021-07-28
작성글 BOOK: CORE ENGLISH BASIC(1)

A. Study the definition of the word, 'conflict'. Make three (3) sentences using the word.

conflict means disagreement with someone or something.

In the USA, people are have conflict about vaccine with government.
Conflict is usually make people are angry.
Tokyo Olympic had many conflict before start it.

B. Make these sentences into English.
(07/28/21)
-여보세요, 심순이 있나요?: Hello, Is Simsoon there?
-전데요, 누구세요?: It's me, Who are you?
-나 돌돌이야.잘 지냈니?: This is Doldol. How are you?

(THANK YOU SO MUCH)
교정내용

A. Study the definition of the word, 'conflict'. Make three (3) sentences using the word.

conflict means disagreement with someone or something. ---> Conflict means disagreement with someone or something.​

 

 

In the USA, people are have conflict about vaccine with government. ---> ​In the USA, people are having a conflict ​with the government​ about the vaccine.​

 

 

Conflict is usually make people are angry. --->​ Conflict usually makes people angry.​

 

 

Tokyo Olympic had many conflict before start it. --->​ Tokyo Olympic had many conflicts before it​ started. ​

 

 

=> Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically. (capitalization)

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(07/28/21)

-여보세요, 심순이 있나요?

Hello, Is Simsoon there? Corrected pattern=> Hello? Is Simsoon there?

-전데요, 누구세요?

It's me, Who are you? Corrected pattern=>​ This is she. Who's calling?

-나 돌돌이야.잘 지냈니?

This is Doldol. How are you? Corrected pattern=>​ This is Doldol. How are you?

 

You're welcome, Sammy! ♥​ 

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