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교정강사 Erica(C)
등록일 2021-07-28
작성글 HOMEWORK:
A. What do you want to be when you grow up?
I want to be a robot engineer when i grow up.
B. Make these sentences into English.
(07/28/21)
-여보세요, 심순이 있나요? = Hello.Is there Siomsoon?
-전데요, 누구세요? = I`m here. What are you?
-나 돌돌이야.잘 지냈니? = I`m Doldol. Did you have nice good day?
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HOMEWORK:

A. What do you want to be when you grow up?

I want to be a robot engineer when I grow up. => Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.

B. Make these sentences into English.

(07/28/21)

-여보세요, 심순이 있나요? = Hello.Is there Siomsoon? ->Hello? Is simsoon there?

=> Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/ expression.

-전데요, 누구세요? = I`m here. What are you? -> This is she. Who's calling?

=> Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/ expression.

- 돌돌이야. 지냈니? = I`m Doldol. Did you have nice good day? -> This is Doldol. How are doing?

=> Another way: Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it. 

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