영작교정

본 화상영어는은 업계 최고의 노하우만을 연구하고
개발한, 가장 진보되고, 창의적인 교육 시스템 연구기관 입니다.

제 목 Jack's homework
교정강사 Jeniffer(C)
등록일 2021-07-29
작성글 HOMEWORK:
A. What's your favorite season and why?
I like winter cuz I'm easily get sweat so when it's summer it's worst but when it's winter other people feel cold but for me It's ok
B. Make these sentences into English.
-그는 절도를 저질렀다.
He did theft.

-그 사진은 슬픔을 묘사한다.
The picture is describing sad.

-그는 나에게 몸을 기댔다.
He leaned his body to me.
교정내용

HOMEWORK:

 A. What's your favorite season and why?

I like winter cuz I'm easily get sweat so when it's summer it's worst but when it's winter other people feel cold but for me It's ok

---> I like winter coz' I easily get sweat when it's summer. It's worse but when it's winter other people feel cold but for me, it's okay.

=> Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.

B. Make these sentences into English.

-그는 절도를 저질렀다. 

He did theft. ---> He committed theft.

=> Another way: Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

​-그 사진은 슬픔을 묘사한다. 

The picture is describing sad. ---> This picture depicts sadness.

=> Another way: Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

-그는 나에게 몸을 기댔다.

He leaned his body to me. ---> He leaned toward me.

=> Another way: Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

목록