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제 목 homework Christine (07/28/21)
교정강사 Catherine(C)
등록일 2021-07-29
작성글 A. How does Iran differ from your country?
Iranian must follow religious laws but Korea isn't.
B. Make these sentences into English.
(07/28/21)
-그는 자기 돈 모두를 도박에 썼다.
-그들은 군인들을 환영했다.
-그녀는 구조대원들에게 감사를 표시했다.
-He spend all of his money on gambling.
- They welcomed military.
-She express her appreciation to rescue workers.
교정내용

A. How does Iran differ from your country?

Iranian must follow religious laws but Korea isn't. ---> Iranian must follow religious laws but Koreans ​mustn't.​

 

=> Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.

B. Make these sentences into English.

(07/28/21)

-그는 자기 돈 모두를 도박에 썼다.

He spend all of his money on gambling.​ Corrected pattern=> He spent all his money on gambling.

-그들은 군인들을 환영했다.

They welcomed military.​ Corrected pattern=>​ They welcomed the soldiers.

-그녀는 구조대원들에게 감사를 표시했다.

She express her appreciation to rescue workers. Corrected pattern=>​ She thanked the rescuers.​

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