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교정강사 Catherine(C)
등록일 2021-07-30
작성글 BOOK: CORE ENGLISH BASIC(1)

A. Tell me about your weekend in detail.

I'm going to get up around 9.
And read book about Sherlock Holmes.
After eat lunch, I'll play chess with my younger sister.
In the evening, I'll play computer game.

B. Make these sentences into English.
(07/30/21)
-내 생각에 너는 벌처럼 바쁘겠구나.그럼 내일은 뭘 할거니?: I think you'll busy look like bee. So, What are you going to do tomorrow?
-내일은 스노쿨링을 할거야.: I'm going to do snorkeling
-나도 스노쿨링 좋아해. 나도 그거 해보고 싶다.: I like snorkeling too. I want to that too.

(THANK YOU SO MUCH)
교정내용

A. Tell me about your weekend in detail.

I'm going to get up around 9. ---> I'm going to get up at around 9.​

 

And read book about Sherlock Holmes. ---> And, read books about Sherlock Holmes.​

 

After eat lunch, I'll play chess with my younger sister. ---> After I eat lunch, I play chess with my younger sister.​

 

In the evening, I'll play computer game. ---> In the evening, I'll play computer games.​

 

=> Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.

B. Make these sentences into English.

(07/30/21)

-내 생각에 너는 벌처럼 바쁘겠구나.그럼 내일은 뭘 할거니?

I think you'll busy look like bee. So, What are  you going to do tomorrow? Corrected pattern=> I think you're busy as a bee. Then what will you do tomorrow?

-내일은 스노쿨링을 할거야.

I'm going to do snorkeling Corrected pattern=>​ I'll go snorkeling in the sea.

-나도 스노쿨링 좋아해. 나도 그거 해보고 싶다.

I like snorkeling too. I want to that too. Corrected pattern=>​ I love snorkeling. I hope to do that.

 

You're welcome, Sammy!

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