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제 목 Did Virgin Galactic beat Blue Origin in the space tourism race?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2021-08-05
작성글 A.) Did Virgin Galactic beat Blue Origin in the space tourism race?

It could not be said that the first launch always precede the second one.
So Iit could not be said that Virgin Galatic beated Blue origin just because that launched earlier than this.


B.) Make these sentences into English.

(08/02/21)

-젂적으로 동감입니까?
I wholly agree with you .

-몇 달간 짂행되었던 협상이 드디어
성공적으로 끝맺어서 기쁩니다.
I am very happy to complete the negotiation executed for months successfully at last.

-계약서에 정식으로 서명해 주세요.
Please sign the contract formally.
교정내용

A.) Did Virgin Galactic beat Blue Origin in the space tourism race? 

 

It could not be said  that  the first launch always precede the second one.

So Iit could not be said that Virgin Galatic beated Blue origin just because that launched earlier than this. 

 

=> It could not be said  that  the first launch always precede the second one.

So it could not be said that Virgin Galatic beat Blue origin just because that launched earlier than this. 

 B.) Make these sentences into English. 

 

 (08/02/21) 

 

-젂적으로 동감입니까?

I wholly agree with you .

=> Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.

(Punctuation)

Are we in full agreement?

-몇 달간 짂행되었던 협상이 드디어 

 성공적으로 끝맺어서 기쁩니다. 

I am very happy to complete the negotiation executed for months successfully  at last.

=> Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

I'm glad to see months of negotiations come to a success.

 

-계약서에 정식으로 서명해 주세요. 

Please sign the contract  formally.

=> Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

Please sign the official contract. 

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