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제 목 Would you like to trace your own family tree?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2021-08-05
작성글 A.) Would you like to trace your own family tree? Why or why not?

Genealogy has developed in Korea since very long time ago, which enables many Koreans trace their family tree if they want.
So I am not interested in tracing my family tree.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(08/04/21)

-왕복 가격입니까?
Is this the price for return ticket.

-제 예약확인 번호는 E7009GA입니다.
My confirmation number is E7009GA.

-하루라도 빨리 떠날 수 잇도록 바꾸고
싶어요.
I would like to change the ticket so that I could depart even a day earlier.
교정내용

A.) Would you like to trace your own family tree? Why or why not?

 

Genealogy has developed in Korea  since  very long time ago, which enables many Koreans trace their family tree if they  want.

So I am not interested in tracing my family tree. 

 

 B.) Make these sentences into English. 

 

 (08/04/21) 

 

-왕복 가격입니까? 

Is this the price for return ticket.

=> Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.

(Punctuation)

Is this the price for a return ticket?

=> Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

Is this the roundtrip price?


-제 예약확인 번호는 E7009GA입니다. 

My confirmation number is E7009GA. 

 

 

-하루라도 빨리 떠날 수 잇도록 바꾸고 

 싶어요. 

I would like to change the ticket so that I could depart even a day earlier. 

=> Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

I need to change my flight to one that departs a day earlier.​

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