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교정강사 Mariel(C)
등록일 2021-04-14
작성글 A. What kind of movies do you watch? Why?
I watch cartoon movies.
B. Make these sentences into English.

-나는 요가를 배울 거야. 그래서 몸무게를 줄일 거야. I will learn yoga. So I'm going to lose weight.
-나는 아무런 계획이 없어. I don't have any plan
-여보세요. 저는 돌돌 인데요심순이 있나요? Hello. I'm a stone.Do you have Simsooni?
교정내용

What kind of movies do you watch? Why?

I watch cartoon movies. 

 

​I will learn yoga. So I'm going to lose weight. --> I'm going to learn yoga. Then I'm going to lose my weight. => Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.

 I don't have any plan --> I don't have any plans. => Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.(Punctuation)

Hello. I'm a stone. Do you have Simsooni? --> Hello, this is Doldol. Is siomsoon there? => Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.

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