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제 목 04.03
교정강사 Enya(C)
등록일 2021-04-14
작성글 A. What is your biggest goal in life?
: First think is earning much money but it isn't biggest goal of my life. I think healthy life is most important.
Healthy life contain not only physical health but also mental health.


B. Make these sentences into English.
(04/13/21)
-그들은 매일 배달한다. : They deliver everyday.
-그 시합은 일찍 끝났다. : That match end early
-이 쇼는 활기차다. : This show is active.
교정내용

A. What is your biggest goal in life?

   : First think is earning much money but it isn't biggest goal of my life. I think healthy life is most important.

     Healthy life contain not only physical health but also mental health. 

--> I think of earning much money, but it isn't the biggest goal of my life.

--> Having a healthy lifestyle is the most important goal.

--> Healthy lifestyle is consist of physical and mental health.

 

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(04/13/21)

-그들은 매일 배달한다.  : They deliver everyday. or They deliver daily.

-그 시합은 일찍 끝났다. : That match end early --> The race finished early.

-이 쇼는 활기차다.         : This show is active. --> The show is lively.

 

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