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교정강사 Kristina(C)
등록일 2021-08-19
작성글 -Would you cross an Inca rope bridge, why or why not?
I think I would. Because grasses were much stronger than I thought last time and people in Peru use that bridge. I think that would be a quite fun experience.

(08/19/21)
-그 육군 장교들은 혐의를 부인했다. The military soldiers didn't agree about their faults.
-난 집을 청소해줄 사람을 고용했어. I hired a person to clean my house.
-넌 아무것도 아닌 일에 너무 많은 에너지를 써. You use so much energy for nothing.
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Would you cross an Inca rope bridge, why or why not? 

 I think I would. Because grasses were much stronger than I thought last time and people in Peru use that bridge. *Yes, I think I would. That's because grasses were stronger than I thought the last time. 

~> This sentence is okay. This is another way of saying it.

and people in Peru use that bridge *People in Peru use that bridge. 

~> This sentence is okay. This is another way of saying it.​​

I think that would be a quite fun experience. ​✔ 

 

(08/19/21)

-그 육군 장교들은 혐의를 부인했다. The military soldiers didn't agree about their faults.

*The Army officers denied the accusations. 

~> Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/expression.

-난 집을 청소해줄 사람을 고용했어. I hired a person to clean my house.
*I hired a house cleaner. 
~> This sentence is okay. This is another way of saying it.

-넌 아무것도 아닌 일에 너무 많은 에너지를 써. You use so much energy for nothing.

​*You expend so much energy on nothing. 

~> This sentence is okay. This is another way of saying it.

 

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