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제 목 Should a president have the right to shut down a country’s parliament?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2021-08-24
작성글 A.) Should a president have the right to shut down a country’s parliament?

Power or authority are likely to be misused or abused, which makes a monitoring system necessary to admanistration.
Parliament has a role of monitoring the administeration.
There could be an occasion for a president to do some actions for immense situations without consent of parliament.
But it could never be thought to shut down parliament in a democratic country.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(08/23/21)

- 전 예쁜 여자 앞에 있으면 얼굴이 빨개져요.
My face turns red in front of a beautiful woman.

- 하루 종일 라면이 땡기네.
I have missed Ramyeon all day long.

- 일손이 부족하네.
We need more workforce.
교정내용

A.) Should a president have the right to shut down a country’s parliament? 

 

Power or authority  are likely to be misused  or abused, which makes a monitoring system necessary to admanistration.

=> Power or authority  is likely to be misused  or abused, which makes a monitoring system necessary for administration.​


 

Parliament has a role of monitoring the administeration. 

=> Parliament has a role of monitoring the administration. ​

 

 

There could be an occasion for a president to do some actions for immense situations without  consent of parliament.

But it could never be thought to shut down parliament in a democratic country.

=> There could be an occasion for a president to do some actions for immense situations without  the consent of parliament.

But it could never be thought to shut down parliament in a democratic country.​

 

 B.) Make these sentences into English. 

 

 (08/23/21) 

 

- 전 예쁜 여자 앞에 있으면 얼굴이 빨개져요. 

My face turns red in front of a beautiful woman.

=> Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

- My face turns red when I'm in front of a pretty girl.

 

- 하루 종일 라면이 땡기네. 

I have missed Ramyeon all day long.

=> Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

- I've been craving ramen all day.


- 일손이 부족하네. 

We need more workforce. 

=> Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

- There are not enough workers.

 

 

• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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