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교정강사 Erica(C)
등록일 2021-03-21
작성글 I might want to say that I am a repairwoman(hihi).
My bathroom had a drain problem. So I wanted to call for plumer and searched for that online.
I found out that if a plumer visit my apartment to repair blocking the drain, I have to pay more money depending on the state.
I took a lot of work to solve the problem and I finally pulled out the plastic drain screen and got rid of hairy things.
I put it into the drain hole again and this was the moment I got to be a repairwoman. Now everything is okay.
You know, it's like we don't thank until we have some problem in the house.
Well, I am not a christan, I know we have a lot of things to be thankful.
I can breathe a fresh air even at home because of the mountain near my place.
This is the best thing I have since we moved in. Bye
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I might want to say that I am a repairwoman. My bathroom had a problem with the drainage. So, I wanted to call a plumber. I searched for a plumber online and I found a plumber to repair the clogged. I have to pay much money depending on the condition / state. It took a lot of work to solve the problem and I finally pulled out the plastic drain and got rid of the hair. I put back the drain hole again and that was the moment I got to be a repairwoman. Now everything is okay. You know, it’s like we don’t become thankful of everything until we have some problems in the house.

Well, I am not a Christian, I know we have a lot of things to be thankful. I can breathe fresh air even at home because of the mountain near my place. This is the best thing I have since we moved in.

Bye. 

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