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제 목 | Hi |
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교정강사 | Erica(C) |
등록일 | 2021-03-21 |
작성글 |
It is sunday. My husband went to his office and my daughter is sleeping now. I am in the veranda and get the sunshine from the window over a coffee. This is the best time I have for a day. Sometimes my daughter tell me I am like a plant. Before we had moved into this apartment, There was no sunshine in our veranda during winter season. The sunshine was cut from next tall apartment and so didn't reach our house. When we were planning to move out, No.1 requirement was that we can get the sunshine through all the season. Now I totally enjoy the sunlight every sunny day. I am happy with this. Bye |
교정내용 |
It is Sunday. My husband went to his office and my daughter is sleeping
now. I am in the veranda getting sunlight
from the window over a cup of coffee. This is my favorite time of the day. Sometimes my daughter tells me that I am like a plant. Before we moved into this apartment. There was no sunlight in our veranda in winter season. The sunlight was blocked from a tall apartment near our house so it didn’t reach our house. When we were planning to move in, number one requirement was to get the sunlight all year round. Now, I totally enjoy the sunlight every sunny day. I am happy with this. Bye. |
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