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교정강사 Sarah(C)
등록일 2021-09-08
작성글 2021.9.7
Q. Should visitors be allowed in nature reserves?
A. No they shouldn't be allowed in nature reserves because many animals are live in nature reserves, but if visitors be allowed in the area, the animals could get some stress.
영작숙제
-그녀는 그 수집가에게 눈을 굴렸다.
She glare her eyes at the collector.
-나의 남편은 코를 곤다.
My husband snores.
-난 집에 곧 돌아올거야.
I will come back soon.
교정내용

2021.9.7

Q. Should visitors be allowed in nature reserves?

A. No they shouldn't be allowed in nature reserves because many animals are live in nature reserves, but if visitors be allowed in the area, the animals could get some stress.

=> Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically. 

A. No, they should not be allowed in nature reserves because many animals live in nature reserves, but if visitors are permitted in the area, the animals could be stressed.

영작숙제

-그녀는 그 수집가에게 눈을 굴렸다.

She glare her eyes at the collector. => She rolled her eyes at the collector. => This sentence is okay. This is another way of saying it.​

 

-나의 남편은 코를 곤다.

My husband snores. (Correct)

-난 집에 곧 돌아올거야.

I will come back soon. =>​ I will return home soon. => This sentence is okay. This is another way of saying it.​​​

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