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제 목 Today's homework(4/19)
교정강사 Enya(C)
등록일 2021-04-19
작성글 A. How can using social networking sites invade your privacy?
The social networking sites were contaminated by many weird commercials. so I try not to use it as possible as I can.
B. Make these sentences into English.
(04/19/21)[
(04/19/21)
-난 내 머리를 짧게 잘랐다.
I cut my hair short.
-우리는 멀리 가지 않았다.
We didn't go far.
-그 새는 높이 날았다.
The bird flew high.
교정내용

A. How can using social networking sites invade your privacy?

The social networking sites were contaminated by many weird commercials. so I try not to use it as possible as I can. -> The social networking sites are contaminated by many weird commercials, so I try not to use it as much as possible.

 

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(04/19/21)

-난 내 머리를 짧게 잘랐다.

I cut my hair short. √

 

-우리는 멀리 가지 않았다.

We didn't go far. √​

 

 

-그 새는 높이 날았다.

The bird flew high.​ √​

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