영작교정

본 화상영어는은 업계 최고의 노하우만을 연구하고
개발한, 가장 진보되고, 창의적인 교육 시스템 연구기관 입니다.

제 목 Homework(●'◡'●)
교정강사 Vanessa(D)
등록일 2021-09-15
작성글 Today I did the flag steal game.
It's very funny and tired.
It has the jail and safe place.
Our team is won the two time.
It's a fun and good day.
Good night teacher.
╰( ̄ω ̄o)(~o ̄3 ̄)~O(∩_∩)O
교정내용

Today, I played flag stealing game. It was fun but I'm tired. Our team won two times. It's a fun and good day.

Good night, teacher!

 

-------------

Good night, Serim! Take a rest and sleep well! ^^ 

 

목록