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제 목 Could lyrebirds be good pets? Why or why not? Please elaborate your answers.
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2021-04-19
작성글 Could lyrebirds be good pets? Why or why not? Please elaborate your answers.

->Yes, It can mimic human's language like a parrot. I think living with lyrebirds is quite interesting.


● Make these sentences into English.

(04/06/21)

-품질이 떨어지면 재주문이 끊길 수도 있습니다.
Poor quality may cut off reorders
-고객들의 신용도 잃고 싶지 않습니다
-I don't want to lose customer trust

-한번 잃으면 다시 얻기 어려운게 신용입니다.
-If you lose it, it is difficult to get it again
교정내용

Could lyrebirds be good pets? Why or why not? Please elaborate your answers.

 

->Yes, It can mimic human's language like a parrot. I think living with lyrebirds is quite interesting. 

=> Yes, they could be good pets. Because they can mimic human language like a parrot. And, I think living with lyrebirds is quite interesting. ​

 

 

 ● Make these sentences into English. 

 

 (04/06/21)

 

-품질이 떨어지면 재주문이 끊길 수도 있습니다.

Poor quality may cut off reorders.

 

=> Poor quality may cut off reorders.

​OR

=> A drop in quality could lose repeat orders.

 

-고객들의 신용도 잃고 싶지 않습니다

-I don't want to lose customer trust.​​

 

=> We also don't want to lose our customers' trust.


-한번 잃으면 다시 얻기 어려운게 신용입니다.

-If you lose it, it is difficult to get it again​.

=> It's hard to win trust back once it's lost.​

• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.​​

 


 

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