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교정강사 Erica(C)
등록일 2021-09-30
작성글 HOMEWORK:
A. What is your favorite place in the house? why?
It`s a living room. Because i can read books in there.
B. Make these sentences into English.
(09/30/21)
-파이는 어떠니? = What about some pie?
-음! 그건 좋아. = Hmm! That`s good.
-덕보는 어떠니?그도 파이를 원하니? = What about Dugbo? Does he wants pie?
교정내용

HOMEWORK:

A. What is your favorite place in the house? why?

It`s a  the living room. Because I can read books in there.

=> Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.

(Capitalization)

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(09/30/21)

-파이는 어떠니? = What about some pie?

-! 그건 좋아. = Hmm! That`s good. -> Mmm! That sounds good.

=> Another way: Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

 

-덕보는 어떠니?그도 파이를 원하니? = What about Dugbo? Does he wants pie? -> What about Dugbo? Does he want a pie?

=> Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/ expression. 

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