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교정강사 Vanessa(D)
등록일 2021-10-01
작성글 I am very happy to eat chicken to dinner.
It's delicious and yummy.
Do you like chicken?
I like chicken, too much.
When I was young my parents did the chicken store.
My parent's chicken is very good and it has much ddock.
I liked that If my parents are open the chicken store one more time I will cheer my family.
Have a good weekend and happy holiday.
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I am very happy because I ate chicken in dinner and it's very delicious! Do you like chicken? I like it very much!

When I was young, my parents had a chicken store. My parent's chicken is very delicious that's why I want them to open the chicken store again and I will surely cheer for them!

Have a good weekend and happy holiday!

 

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I like chicken too! It's very delicious! ^^

Good night and happy weekend, Serim! ^^ 

 

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