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제 목 | Homework(●'◡'●) |
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교정강사 | Vanessa(D) |
등록일 | 2021-10-01 |
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I am very happy to eat chicken to dinner. It's delicious and yummy. Do you like chicken? I like chicken, too much. When I was young my parents did the chicken store. My parent's chicken is very good and it has much ddock. I liked that If my parents are open the chicken store one more time I will cheer my family. Have a good weekend and happy holiday. |
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I am very happy because I ate chicken in dinner and it's very delicious! Do you like chicken? I like it very much! When I was young, my parents had a chicken store. My parent's chicken is very delicious that's why I want them to open the chicken store again and I will surely cheer for them! Have a good weekend and happy holiday!
--------------- I like chicken too! It's very delicious! ^^ Good night and happy weekend, Serim! ^^
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