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교정강사 Mariel(C)
등록일 2021-03-22
작성글 A. How often do you drink fruit juice? What kind of fruit juice do you drink?
B: I don`t like fruit juice. I sometimes drink juice that my kids left .

B. Make these sentences into English.

-의사들은 흔히 아주 장시간 근무를 한다.
Doctors often work very long times.

-한 무리의 아이들이 거리에서 공을 가지고 놀고 있었다.
Children of a Group play with a ball on the street.

-나는 창문 쪽으로 몸을 움직였다.
I moved to window.
교정내용

 How often do you drink fruit juice? What kind of fruit juice do you drink? 

Answer: I don`t like fruit juice. I sometimes drink juice that my kids left . --> I don't like fruit juices. I sometimes drink what my kids had left. 


=> Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/expression.


 

Doctors often work very long times. ------> Doctors often work very long hours. 


= > Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/expression.

 

Children of a Group play with a ball on the street. ------> A group of kids were playing with a ball in the street.


= > The sentence is corrected grammatically. 

 

I  moved to window.  ------> I moved towards the window. 


= > The sentence is corrected grammatically. 

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