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제 목 Today's homework(10/06)
교정강사 Enya(C)
등록일 2021-10-06
작성글 HOMEWORK:
A. What is there to be happy about in the world today?
Many people pursue money and they think money can bring happy. a lot money is virtue to happy life but It's not a essential point to complete making happy life.
B. Make these sentences into English.
(10/06/21)
-식사가 굉장히 맛있었습니다.
It was a very delicious meal.
-디저트를 드시겠어요?
Would you like to have some dessert?
-와인 좀 드릴까요?
Can I get you some wine?
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HOMEWORK:

A. What is there to be happy about in the world today?

Many people pursue money and they think money can bring happy. a lot money is virtue to happy life but It's not a essential point to complete making happy life. 

 

 

CORRECTION:

 

Many people pursue money and they think money can bring happiness. Having a lot of money is not an essential point to complete a happy life. ​

 

 

(10/06/21)B. Make these sentences into English.

-식사가 굉장히 맛있었습니다.

It was a very delicious meal. ▶ The meal was delicious.

-디저트를 드시겠어요?

Would you like to have some dessert? Would you care for dessert?

 

-와인 좀 드릴까요?

Can I get you some wine?​ Would you like some wine?

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