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교정강사 Vanessa(D)
등록일 2021-10-06
작성글 I did the rope game
and together jump rope in my class.
I am do in the together jump rope i'm swing the rope
and the girl team won in the rope game.
I was very excited and the boy team is lose the rope game.
Today was very happy and tired day.
Why I did the rope game and the together jump rope?
Because my gym teacher's son is sick and
he didn't come the school.
Have a good night and see you tomorrow.
Bye Bye.
교정내용

We played jump rope in the class and I was the one who swung the rope. Our team won and the boy's team lose the game. It was tiring yet a happy day. Why we played the rope game? It is because my teacher's son was sick so he did not come to school.

Have a good night and see you tomorrow!

 

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You did well today, Serim! Good night and see you tomorrow! ^^ 

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