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교정강사 Arah(C)
등록일 2021-10-07
작성글 A. How often do you spend time with your family?
Since most of my siblings are married, we live in different cities. So, it is hard for us to gather.
That makes us meet only a couple of times in a year like on my mother's birthday or New Year's Day.
Even if we sometimes gather, whenever we meet, we do enjoy our time together.
We travel somewhere or eat out at the lavish restaurant.
B. Make these sentences into English:
(10/05/21)
-난 여전히 여기에 네가 필요해. I still need you in here.
-학교 끝나면 바로 집으로 와. Come back home right after the class.
-교차로에서 왼쪽으로 꺾어라. Turn left at the intersection.
교정내용

A. How often do you spend time with your family?

Since most of my siblings are married, we live in different cities. 

So, it is hard for us to gather.  

That makes us meet only a couple of times in a year like on my mother's birthday or New Year's Day.  

Even if we only gather on occasion sometimes gather, whenever we meet, we do enjoy our time together. 

=> Corrected vocabulary.

We travel somewhere or eat out at the​ lavish restaurant.  

 

B. Make these sentences into English:

(10/05/21)

-난 여전히 여기에 네가 필요해. I still need you in here. 

-학교 끝나면 바로 집으로 와. Come back home right after the class. -> Come straight home after school.

=> Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/ expression.

-교차로에서 왼쪽으로 꺾어라. Turn left at the intersection. ​​

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