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교정강사 Arah(C)
등록일 2021-10-07
작성글 A. What's the best thing about your family?
We can say that we are the best family in the world. We can enjoy our lives better than any other people.
Even if we suffer from some accidents, we stand it and help each other to overcome all of the pain.
I love the way my family handle problems and the way they express love to each other.
Someday when I have a baby, I wish to have a family like mine.
B. Make these sentences into English:
(10/07/21)
-이 프로젝트에 우리 회사 사활이 달렸어. ?
-우리는 상대도 안 되더라. ?
-티켓은 선착순으로 판매하고 있어요. Tickets are sold in a first come - first served way.
교정내용

A. What's the best thing about your family?

We can say that we are the best family in the world. 

We can enjoy our lives better than any other people. 

Even if we suffer from some accidents, we stand it up and help each other to overcome all of the pain. 

=> Corrected vocabulary.

I love the way my family handle problems and the way they express love to each other. 

Someday when I have a baby, I wish to have a family like mine. 

 

B. Make these sentences into English:

(10/07/21)

-이 프로젝트에 우리 회사 사활이 달렸어. ? -> This project is a matter of life and death in the company.

-우리는 상대도 안 되더라. ? -> We were no match for them.

-티켓은 선착순으로 판매하고 있어요. Tickets are sold in a first come - first served way. -> Tickets are given out on a first come, first served.

=> Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/ expression.

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