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제 목 What do you think the benefits we get from eating vegetables?
교정강사 Happy(C)
등록일 2021-10-07
작성글 A. What are the benefits we get from eating vegetables?
When we eat enough vegetables, we will healthy.(But not too much.)

B. Make these sentences into English.
(10/07/21)
-나는 8시쯤 일어나. 여전히 졸린걸.
I get up about 8. I'm still sleepy.
-운동 후에 밥을 먹도록 하자.
We will eat breakfast after exercise.
-하나, 둘 하나, 둘
One, two, one, two.
교정내용

A. What are the benefits we get from eating vegetables?

 When we eat enough vegetables, we will healthy.(But not too much.)

Corrected:  When we eat enough vegetables, we will be healthy.(But not too much.)​ The sentence is corrected grammatically.

 

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(10/07/21)

-나는 8시쯤 일어나. 여전히 졸린걸.

I get up about 8. I'm still sleepy. 

Corrected: I get up at eight. I'm still sleepy. Your sentence sis okay, and this is another way of saying it.

-운동 후에 밥을 먹도록 하자.

We will eat breakfast after exercise. 

-하나, 둘 하나, 둘

One, two, one, two.​  

​Thank you for doing your homework Tae Gyu, keep studying!!!!

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