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제 목 Homework
교정강사 Niah(C)
등록일 2021-04-20
작성글 A. My favorite singer is IU and BTS. I like Block B, too.
And my favorite member of my family is my mother. Because she is so nice to me.

B. (04/20/21)

-얄미도 같이 갈 수 있을까?
-글쎄, 요가 수업 가야 할 텐데.내가 전화 해볼게.
-좋아, 그때 보자.
-Can Yalmi do together?
-Well, she should go yoga class. I'll call her.
-Okay. See you.
교정내용

A. My favorite singer is IU and BTS. I like Block B, too. 

And my favorite member of my family is my mother. Because she is so nice to me.​ (Correct) 


B. (04/20/21)


-얄미도 같이 갈 수 있을까?

-글쎄, 요가 수업 가야 할 텐데.내가 전화 해볼게.

-좋아, 그때 보자.

-Can Yalmi do together? --> Can Yalmi come with you?

-Well, she should go yoga class. I'll call her. --> Well.. She has to go to a yoga lesson. But I'll try to call her.

=> Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

-Okay. See you. (Correct)


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