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제 목 Why did Arthur Eddington travel to Principe?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2021-10-13
작성글 A.) Why did Arthur Eddington travel to Principe? Please elaborate your answer.

Arthur Eddington was a British scientist who was interested
in Einstein's theory of relativity which could be proved in a total eclipse.
He knew that a total eclipse could be seen in the island of Principe.
That would be why he traveled to Principe


B.) Make these sentences into English.

(10/06/21)

-더도 말고 덜도 말고, 장사가 오늘만 같으면 좋겠어요.
I hope today's sales to be continued in the future.

-오늘 뒤풀이 참석할거지?
Will you join the wrap party today?

-나 원래 롱다리야
I was born with long legs.
교정내용 A.) Why did Arthur Eddington travel to Principe? Please elaborate your answer.
 
    Arthur Eddington was a British scientist who was interested 
in Einstein's theory of relativity, which could be proved in a total eclipse.
  He knew that a total eclipse could be seen in the island of Principe.
That would be why he traveled to Principe. 

=> Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically. (Punctuation)

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(10/06/21)

-더도 말고 덜도 말고, 장사가 오늘만 같으면 좋겠어요.
 I hope today's sales to be continued in the future. => Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

​=> I just wish it could be like this all the time-no more, no less.

-오늘 뒤풀이 참석할거지?
 Will you join the wrap party today? 
=> You’re going to the after-party tonight, right?

-나 원래 롱다리야

 I  was born with long legs. => Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

=> I've got long legs.

 

• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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