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교정강사 Arah(C)
등록일 2021-10-14
작성글 A. What advice from your parents do you always follow?
My mom always says that working hard and steadily is so important.
She also tells me giving up easily is like a poison. So, since I started to work, I have kept that in mind.
Even if doing something steadily was really hard especially when I was little, she admired me for not giving up.
What I did before was not a big thing. But, I believe small changes make a big result.
I live every day. And I work, study and love every day. Some day, later when I am the same age of my mom, I think I will appreciate with her.
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A. What advice from your parents do you always follow?

My mom always says that working hard and steadily is so important. 

She also tells me giving up easily is like a poison. 

So, since I started working to work, I have kept that in mind. ​

Even if doing something steadily was really hard especially when I was little, she admired me for not giving up. 

What I did before was not a big thing. ​​

But, I believe small changes make a big result. 

I live every day. 

And I work, study and love every day. 

Some day, later when I am at the same age of as my mom, I think I will appreciate with her. ​

=> Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically. 

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