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| 교정강사 | Arah(C) | 
| 등록일 | 2021-10-14 | 
| 작성글 | 
A. What advice from your parents do you always follow? My mom always says that working hard and steadily is so important. She also tells me giving up easily is like a poison. So, since I started to work, I have kept that in mind. Even if doing something steadily was really hard especially when I was little, she admired me for not giving up. What I did before was not a big thing. But, I believe small changes make a big result. I live every day. And I work, study and love every day. Some day, later when I am the same age of my mom, I think I will appreciate with her.  | 
| 교정내용 | 
 A. What advice from your parents do you always follow? My mom always says that working hard and steadily is so important.  She also tells me giving up easily is like a poison.  So, since I started working  Even if doing something steadily was really hard especially when I was little, she admired me for not giving up.  What I did before was not a big thing.  But, I believe small changes make a big result.  I live every day.  And I work, study and love every day.  Some day, later when I am at the same age  => Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.  | 
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