본 화상영어는은 업계 최고의 노하우만을 연구하고
개발한, 가장 진보되고, 창의적인 교육 시스템 연구기관 입니다.
제 목 |
homework![]() |
---|---|
교정강사 | Arah(C) |
등록일 | 2021-10-14 |
작성글 |
A. What advice from your parents do you always follow? My mom always says that working hard and steadily is so important. She also tells me giving up easily is like a poison. So, since I started to work, I have kept that in mind. Even if doing something steadily was really hard especially when I was little, she admired me for not giving up. What I did before was not a big thing. But, I believe small changes make a big result. I live every day. And I work, study and love every day. Some day, later when I am the same age of my mom, I think I will appreciate with her. |
교정내용 |
A. What advice from your parents do you always follow? My mom always says that working hard and steadily is so important. She also tells me giving up easily is like a poison. So, since I started working Even if doing something steadily was really hard especially when I was little, she admired me for not giving up. What I did before was not a big thing. But, I believe small changes make a big result. I live every day. And I work, study and love every day. Some day, later when I am at the same age => Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically. |
목록 |