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교정강사 Erica(C)
등록일 2021-03-22
작성글 It's sunny day. I am getting sunshine on my veranda over a coffee as usual.
I hope that you can give me corrections about my writings as soon as possible.
I checked my stocks on the smartphone application and I knew my money is growing today.
Actually, I could earn a big money last December, but I didn't sell my stocks expecting I could earn more money.
The price of stocks which are related with Covid19 now fell. I still earn money so far but I lost a big income through that stocks.
I should have sold the stocks then. Now I just check and keep my eyes on them everyday.
If I can get a big money again, I sell them and want to take a trip abroad with that money. Bye
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It’s sunny day. I am getting sunlight in my veranda over a cup of coffee as usual.

I hope you can give me corrections about my writing as soon as possible. I checked my stocks on my smartphone application and I knew my money is growing / increasing. Actually, I could earn much money last December but I didn’t sell my stocks. I am expecting that I could earn more money. The prices of stocks which are related with Covid-19 decreased. I still earn money so far but I lost a big income through that stocks. I should have sold the stocks then. Now, I just check and keep my eyes on them every day. If I can get much money. I will sell them. I want to have a trip abroad with that money. Bye.​ 

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