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제 목 | hi |
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교정강사 | Erica(C) |
등록일 | 2021-03-22 |
작성글 |
It's sunny day. I am getting sunshine on my veranda over a coffee as usual. I hope that you can give me corrections about my writings as soon as possible. I checked my stocks on the smartphone application and I knew my money is growing today. Actually, I could earn a big money last December, but I didn't sell my stocks expecting I could earn more money. The price of stocks which are related with Covid19 now fell. I still earn money so far but I lost a big income through that stocks. I should have sold the stocks then. Now I just check and keep my eyes on them everyday. If I can get a big money again, I sell them and want to take a trip abroad with that money. Bye |
교정내용 |
It’s sunny day. I am getting sunlight in my veranda over a cup of coffee as usual. I hope you can give me corrections about my writing as soon as possible. I checked my stocks on my smartphone application and I knew my money is growing / increasing. Actually, I could earn much money last December but I didn’t sell my stocks. I am expecting that I could earn more money. The prices of stocks which are related with Covid-19 decreased. I still earn money so far but I lost a big income through that stocks. I should have sold the stocks then. Now, I just check and keep my eyes on them every day. If I can get much money. I will sell them. I want to have a trip abroad with that money. Bye. |
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