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제 목 Jack's homework
교정강사 Mariel(C)
등록일 2021-10-19
작성글 HOMEWORK:

A. Do you like reading books? Why? Why not?

B. Make these sentences into English.
-저는 변호사가 될 거에요. 저는 불쌍한 사람들을 도와 줄 수도 있어요. 그래서 항상 공부를 열심히 하고 책도 많이 읽어요.
I'll be a lawyer. I can help poor people, so I always study hard and read many books always.
-저는 우주 비행사가 되고 싶어요. 저는 달에 가고 싶어요. 저는 외계인들도 만날 거에요.
I want to be an astronaut. I want to go to moon. I'll meet some aliens either.
-저는 거울을 보는게 좋아요. 저는 유명한 영화배우가 될 거에요.그러면 더 많은 영화배우를 볼 수도 있을 거에요.
I like looking the mirror. I want to be an famous actress. If so I can see much more actors and actress.
교정내용

I'll be a lawyer. I can help poor people, so I always study hard and  read many books always.  --> I want to be a lawyer. I can help poor people. So I always study hard and read lots of books.  

I want to be an astronaut. I want to go to moon. I'll meet some aliens either.  

I like looking the mirror. I want to be an famous actress. If so I can see much more actors and actress. -->I like to look at the mirror. I want to be a famous movie star. I can see many entertainers. 

 

=> Another way: Your sentences are okay and these are another way of saying it.

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