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교정강사 Jeniffer(C)
등록일 2021-04-21
작성글 A. What do you think of modern architecture?

I think modern architecture is'smart'.The days when glamour was trend are gone and the era of practical and modern architecture is coming. The furniture has come to suit the composition and mood of each house.This seems to be highlighting as people value their time at home more.
B. Make these sentences into English.

-그녀는 면접에 늦게 도착하는 바람에 기회를 날렸다.
Because she lated for interview, she blew her opertunity.
-적포도주는 얼룩을 남긴다.
Red wine leaves stain.
-곧 다시 만나기를 고대합니다.
I'm looking forward to meet you again soon.
 
교정내용

A. What do you think of modern architecture?

 

I think modern architecture is "smart". The days when glamour was trend are gone and the era of practical and modern architecture isare coming. The furniture has come to suit the composition and mood of each house. This seems to be highlighting as people value their time at home more.

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

 

-그녀는 면접에 늦게 도착하는 바람에 기회를 날렸다.

Because she lated  was late for interview, she blew her opertunity​ opportunity. => Corrected spelling.

​-​--> She blew her chances by arriving late for the interview.

=> Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.

-적포도주는 얼룩을 남긴다.

Red wine leaves stain. ---> Red wine leaves a stain.

=> Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/ expression.

-곧 다시 만나기를 고대합니다.

I'm looking forward to meet you again soon. ---> I look forward to meeting you again soon.

=> Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/ expression.

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